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ORIGINAL: Jon2
New one. This is called Xie Xie - track 2 on the upcoming EP.
Staring at a blue gate… So argent
OPEN
I sense a flame… Growing inside
my antioxidant, my stearine of heart
Snap from the shadows picks me up
awakes my attention and lust (to…)
see what’s embedded into the skin
of purity and dirt alike (I…)
face a new silence in exchange for my search
the ground blossoms where I turn
running and reaching and not giving in
the yearn comes to me at end
Toughened image freezes the broken
my avid limbs become one with the boundaries
Paresthesia…
Fairies made of wine alight
with the echo of an intoxicated drum beat
another snap opens the brave
opens the brave for another mindframe
the air begins to shrink to thin
the view below is majestic
but until mitigation meets my heart
the fairies dissolve my shards
CONFRONT
NATURE SHALL NEVER BURN [x2]
Wicked laughter, shiny tears
cryptic magic set to appear
A finch goes rapidly across the room
assigned to transfix my soul
I’m paralyzed, I got no chance
But I compose myself composure
luring me into a dance
instead of kill the finch lets me closer
Take my glow, take all my seeds
Throw your possession, come and see
To sow a harvest, fly in me
and you’ll be free
“Blessed are the poor in spirit, for the kingdom of heaven belongs to them.
Blessed are those who mourn, for they will be comforted.
Blessed are the meek, for they will inherit the earth.
Blessed are those who hunger and thirst for righteousness, for they will be satisfied.
Blessed are the merciful, for they will be shown mercy.
Blessed are the pure in heart, for they will see God.
Blessed are the peacemakers, for they will be called the children of God.
Blessed are those who are persecuted for righteousness, for the kingdom of heaven belongs to them.” [This part is from the Bible. Matt. 5: 3-10]
(Saying hello)
Capturing a deep blue breath
I fall into bed
filled with ashen roses
and walls made of ice
And I sense
sudden death
of a friend
as I whisper
gratefulness
REST
WITHIN
Sacrifice and glow
Another gate unfolds
This one is pure sheer gold
I see crowds of people, ignorant to feel
and I’m lacking what they own
This festival permeates my morality
with discomfort and impulsive qualm
I know my odor is too dark to belong (here)
but a touch makes me to hold on
Empty inside, I’m empty tonight
Chocolate kisses, lights in and out
Attractions form as I am tempted to live
moments out of stress and myself
But it all turns to wrinkly mist right beside my feet
As the verses I’ve learned appear in the eyes of the breed not meant for me
I remain as bore [x2]
I remain as higher than more
XIE [x14]
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The track itself is almost 10 minutes long alone, and with a hidden track called Notes to Kill a Man By, it'll cross the 12 minute mark. 
if Homer wrote lyrics...this is epic! Seriously is your ep called the Illiad?  
There is alot to assimilate and digest with these lyrics...very thought provoking.
I sense a lot of conflict in them, light battling dark in the inner soul. It's like you're caught between the sensual and the sacred. It's like you're trapped in a world of pleasure, like an addict, but you've had a touch of God that has called you to a higher place. It seems as though you are searching for something, which so far has remained elusive and in fact the song seems to end on a negative and almost poignant note, which sort of stuns the listener (or reader as the case may be).
You have clearly put a lot of time and effort into writing this, which is to be commended.
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