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Some of my writings - 11/12/2008 1:33:02 PM

Jon2

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Joined: 11/12/2008
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I know I'm new here and I haven't left any feedback to others work (yet), but here is some of my stuff if anyone cares to read and comment on them.

Memory

The view inside me echoes
my desiccated soul
the seeking desire
awoken by my faith
- blue wings of fire

(My eyes walk alive)

The anticipation shouts inside
folding even the night
Wish my longing stain
could reverse the rain
freeze my shade to wait

[Chorus]:
The time staggers in the void
downcast set beyond control
injection of fall, bless of the memory
risen hope, the soil is adorned
The time staggers in the void
downcast set beyond control
injection of fall, bless of the memory
risen hope, the wildfire devotes

My skin is numb, turning to blue
I will receive The Truth
Locked up mood
the eyes that look
beyond the moon

(I’ve felt the prize)

In flames I’m eternal ice
sand that never flies
This bland, deficient day
is like a drug
I cannot seize

[Chorus]

[Bridge]:
Reaching out for the glory
for the wings of purity
scald so deep and burning
scars of the devolutions
counter flow, lift the fences
sharpen my serene senses
Make me forget the cold rain screaming
these visions are twisting the dimensions

[Chorus]

Winter

Memories from yesterday around my head
shadows around me holding my breath
Darkness and frost – frames of my hell
Why does this life bring me closer to my death?

Every second I feel the night
like a sin killing from the inside
I’m going blind, waiting the day
when I will fall into my grave

[Chorus]:
Snow white is not as pretty as it shows
Dark reaching my fear through the bones
Black shade convulsing my faith
Sea of life shrunken to lake

I don’t have a dream to set me free
rotten in the wind is calling me
Dark has chosen me to be a slave
of my soul which bleeds in it’s pain

Every time I try to sleep
Evil falls into my dream
I tasted the flavor of life
this morning for the last time

[Chorus]

Tonight, I will pray
Until the dawn’s awake
Light is a candle dead
and breeze kills what it held

I'll add more if interest is raised.

_____________________________

I’m weak;
Incomplete
Soul of sickness
cries in darkness

When shall I feel
the silent breeze
embrace waiting
out of my reach?